for some reason blogger doesn't let me click on the first page to make it bigger, so here's how the first page goes
-begins with establishing shot of the main character alone
-close up shot of the character's eyes. open. kind of tired/sad.
-eyes shut for a split second
-montage of the past begins, (character is not alone in montage) polaroids, home video, etc.
-character opens eyes. in a new location. backseat of a car. other people in car, but they ignore the character
the rest is on the other page, it should be able to be viewed bigger.
I was thinking of composing the shots, and the story, like chris ware composes his comics. very sparse, and simple. The main character will never speak.
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